Nine-tailed fox in GLPS.

It was a great day for our class 23. We won  the English Popsong contest, and our friends also won the debate contest with other class too. Pleased with ourselves, me and Victoria and Santia went to our teacher, Dean to tell him about these good news. While going to the Dasan Building, we saw a beautiful girl with a long, silver hair.
"There was a girl like her at our camp?"-Victoria
"I don't think so. If there was a girl like her, there would be a rumor about her. And lots of boys falling in love."-Santia
"Maybe she's a PA."-me
"She looks quite young to be a PA."-Santia
"Or she is a new student."-Victoria
"You know what? She looks like a fox."-Santia
"And eyes sharp as a hawk."-Victoria
"Nice observation, Santia and Victoria."-me
At that moment, the girl turned her head and caught a squirrel running past her, with her hands.
We suddenly felt creepy and ran to the teacher Dean's class.
When we told him about the news and the girl, he was angry.
"Can't you see that I 'm busy as a bee? And don't be insolent to me. You are lying. "-Teacher Dean
And we went out of the Dasan Building saying,
"What a great teacher."-me
"Yeah, it wasn't a lie."-Victoria
When going back, we didn't saw the girl and she was soon forgotten.
However, the next morning, at the advisor time, our room PA, Nuri told us that we have a new student.
And it was that girl with a silver hair.

It was quite hard to include "Out, love, insolence, caught/ catch"
and 2 similes
      1 example of alliteration
      1 example of sarcasm.
 *I hope you enjoyed the story!!